[SERVICE] Landing page teardown and rewrite — 3 slots this month, before/afters inside

Conversion copy for affiliate and SaaS landers. Nine years at it, approved seller here, and I only take three rewrites a month because the research is the slow part.

What you get

• A recorded teardown of your current page — 20 to 30 minutes, yours to keep whether or not you hire me
• A full rewrite: headline, subhead, body, CTAs, objection handling, social proof placement
• Two revision rounds
• Three headline variants set up for testing, with what each is actually testing written down

Recent results, with the caveats attached
SaaS trial page: 2.1% → 3.4% signup. 5,400 visitors per variant, ran 18 days.
CPA sweeps lander: 11.2% → 14.8% CTR to offer. Big sample, ran 9 days.
Info product sales page: 1.4% → 1.3%. That one lost. The client kept my structure and reverted the headline, and I think that was the right call.

I post the loser because anyone showing you three wins out of three is showing you three out of thirty.

Price
$850 per page, 50% up front. Teardown alone is $150 and comes off the price if you go ahead.

What I will not do
Write claims I cannot find support for, rewrite a page for an offer I think is a scam, or promise a conversion lift. If your page converts badly because the offer is bad, I will tell you that in the teardown and refund you.

Samples and past client threads linked in my profile. Reply or PM for a slot.

Used Fiona on two sweeps landers last year. Both beat control, and more usefully she explained why each change was there so I could apply the thinking myself on the next twenty pages. Vouching.

Second this. She also turned down an offer of mine and told me why, which cost her $850 and bought a lot of credibility.

Do you work on ecom product pages or is it landers only? Different animal with the reviews and variant pickers in the way.

I do, but I am worse at them and I price accordingly. Happy to do a teardown and point you at someone better if it is a full rewrite.

Out of my budget right now but the $150 teardown is a clever on-ramp. Bookmarked for when I have a page worth tearing down.

Come back when you have traffic rather than a page. There is nothing to optimise at zero visitors and I would be taking your money.